Materials: The materials that she used in her project was acrylic paint on paper.
Idea: The idea of the project is a girl looking down at a leaf, and it looks like she
is in a tent under a starry sky and in front of her there is a pile of rocks that
looks like there was a fire there. It looks like she is sad about something or maybe
she ran away from home and she is living in a tent cause she doesn't want to go
anywhere else.
Improvements: I think the picture needs a found object like maybe a real leaf
texture on the leaf in the girls hands, but other than that the painting is really
good.
Personal Belief: I don't really know what the belief is but i think the painting
looks like the girl is illuminating from the inside and that she doesn't need a fire
because the light is coming from within.
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I agree that Jasmine should add a sage leaf to her painting. I think it'll bring it to life more. (it already is so alive! :) )
ReplyDeleteI love this painting, I'm not sure you should add too much more to it because I feel it is powerful as is. A found leaf would add an earthy touch (which I feel would go along well), but it will not last on there forever!
ReplyDeleteGood crit, VC and comments DL, LR.
ReplyDeleteI feel there is much going on behind this image and hopefully we'll get to see it!